27 People Died in Bangkok. America Read About It in One Voice.
AP: 'Fire breaks out at a pub in Bangkok'Same wire copy on NPR and the Washington PostAl Jazeera: 'Fire engulfs popular Bangkok pub'27 dead, 63 injured, 22 criticalOwner: nonprofit cooperative (member news orgs)
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Just before midnight Sunday, fire tore through the Na Ladprao beer hall in Bangkok. At least 27 people are dead and 63 more were taken to hospital, 22 of them in critical condition. Officials said many of the victims were found in the restrooms at the back of the pub β as far from the flames as the building let anyone get.
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If you read about it in the US, you almost certainly read the exact same words as everyone else. NPR's headline: "Fire breaks out at a pub in Bangkok, killing at least 27 people, officials say." The Washington Post's: the same headline, trimmed of its "officials say." Not two similar stories β the same Associated Press wire story, same anonymous byline, republished word for word on site after site.
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That's not laziness. It's arithmetic. Almost no American outlet keeps a reporter in Bangkok anymore, so when 27 people die there, the entire US press corps is effectively one AP byline. One set of eyes, one notebook, one draft of history β photocopied.
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About that draft. "Fire breaks out." In wire English, fires break out the way rain starts: nobody does them, they simply occur. The only cause in the copy so far is a musician telling Thailand's prime minister he saw smoke coming from a circuit breaker near the stage before the lights went out. The investigation is ongoing.
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Al Jazeera at least wrote its own sentence β "Fire engulfs popular Bangkok pub, killing 27 people and injuring 63" β but look closely and it's the same sentence. The fire is still the character doing everything. The building, the wiring, whoever signed off on the wiring: not pictured.
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Here's why the grammar will matter next week. Deadly nightclub fires are almost never acts of God. Somewhere down the line there is usually wiring, or crowding, or a door β 27 people rarely die in a pub because fire is fast; they die because getting out was slow. "Fire breaks out" is a fine first draft at midnight. The real question is whether anyone files a second draft β because if the one wire service on the scene doesn't ask who owned that circuit breaker, most of the American press never will. They have no one there to ask.
βFires 'break out' the way scandals 'emerge' β grammar with nobody in it.β
ah the wire monoculture is real but let's be honest, nobody's funding a bangkok bureau off my β¬0 subscription. you get what you pay for and we pay nothing
43d ago
SkepticalSue
The one-voice point scared me more than the fire, honestly. Counted my local paper's international section this morning β every single story was the same wire copy.
44d ago
EleanorB
The coverage question is fair, but credit to the AP stringer who was actually there at 2am. The problem is everyone else outsourcing, not the wire itself.
44d ago
GlanceTwice
checked five US sites after reading this. word for word the same AP copy on all five. one voice is right
44d ago
media101prof
The wire monoculture point deserves more attention than it gets. When AP is the only reporter in the room, every 'independent' outlet is effectively running the same room.